All Comments on 'But with a Whimper'

I'm a very auditory person and this little story pushed all my buttons. Thank you. x

It takes more than simple skill with words to construct such an enthralling story. It is apparent that you have experienced such bliss as this yourself several times in your life as it goes far beyond imagination. The sights and sounds of two people joined together, the taste of your bodies, even the scent of his spunk on your flesh is real! A wonderful rendition of lust and hunger and one which I will read again and again. Thank you.