All Comments on 'Buying Abby Ch. 02'

by BadWriter69

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MaternalyObsessedMaternalyObsessedabout 10 years ago
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More tender and more loving.

These two have a good future ahead of them.

strictmaster12880SWBstrictmaster12880SWBabout 10 years ago
You have the perfect user name

Get an editor, BadWriter. Too many mistakes in both chapters.

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayabout 10 years ago
+2 Better

Gave it a +2 because it was better than your last story, but still just a fuck and suck story nothing more.

sabra16023sabra16023about 10 years ago
Keep writing

Need another chapter, maybe pull in one of Abby's girlfriends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Gawd, quit using the word spunk. Ugh!

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