All Comments on 'By Your Side Ch. 01'

good start

Really good start. A longer chapter would be nice though.

I agree that this is a good start. Can the next chapter be longer?

I can see conflict coming from all directions! It has a good hook.

I love the begining. It was a little short but great anyway. Keep them coming. I can't wait for more.

More please!

Give tyler more guts to deal with father! I personally would like to see the father punished in some nasty way. There are so much bastards like that one, in the real world. At least in the fantasy land, writers could make them pay! You have a good start. Keep writing.

really great beginning i hope for more and for the next chapter to be longer

i love it so far. You have me hooked can't wait till the next chapter.

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