All Comments on 'Cabin Fever'

Nicely done.

Great plot and characterisation. You still tend to confuse us by the lack of inverted commas (") when the characters speak but generally your use of separate lines (for each character) helps. Let's see where this story leads us!

Excellent! Great job!

Excellent story. It's awesome to read a story with a real loving wife and husband in it. Thank you very much for writing it.