by DerelictionOfSanity
That was a fantastic story that showed the development of a true love that one will never forget. I hope that you will continue to write more about this newly formed couple.
I loved the charactors in this story. I cant wait to read the next chapter. Excellent work :)
Thank you for giving us an actual story with a plot, character development and emotion.
Great storytelling with both an interesting plot and people with whom one would love to spend an evening of good conversation. Indeed, these are good men and well worthy of the love they have found. There should be more men like them and more writers like this author. It would seem very natural to sit naked before a fire with them!
I love the slow build and detail of the characterization. I liked the way you included all of the doubts and wants in the confusing reality of a person trying to cross a line he never truly realized existed.
It was a wonderful beginning...can't wait to read the rest. I am glad you intriqued me enought to try you next!
Thanks for recommending your own work.
You should write more...J.K.
It's such a good story, it definitely turned me on :) Thanks againg and keep up the good writing.
Good stuff. Sucking and fingering...some good deep fucking is certain to follow.