All Comments on 'Cafe Lawyer Ch. 01'

Best part is Juan saying he and others saw the shooting and now tell him how it happened. LOL

So far so good.

You love something so much she will love you more because you are rewriting this beautiful place....lol hope that is going to work though ? ? ?

Great start.....bill....

Wow , I sure am glad I never met and proposed to you. What a fucking useless marriage that would have been. Where one proposes is window dressing . What matters is the love and the heart. You make yourself sound superficial.

i realize this is overdue, but I like this one. I completely understand overwriting the bad old memories....

If my boyfriend proposed to me in the same place he proposed to his ex wife, I would tell him to take that ring and proposal and shove it! That isn't romantic!

and like an earthquake erupts. Always beware of aftershocks. TK U MLJ LV NV

with interesting background, moments and characters.

I would've liked a bit more detail, maybe more conversation between Jim & Carol, especially them telling each other about their previous marriages. We get enough hints to know what's going on, but it would be better (for me, anyway) to hear their thoughts about what happened to them.

Loved this first chapter! now I'm waiting on next installment Keep'em comin.

Interesting story, with some unconventional characters. Looking forward to the next chapter.