by babylez
I can not rate this story the best, because they are all wonderful. As always your seduction is what every woman craves and what every man wants to do for his woman.
I can't wait to see what happens when Momma find them together... A three some???
I really enjoyed how you developed the characters in this one and I'm always looking foward to your future stories because they're worth to reading. I'm writing one right now but I don't think I'll be good as you, LOL. I find it really cool that you refer to Jordan on first page, which brings lot of great memories. Final line in this chapter has to rank as one of the best curtain lines. Keep it up!
Loved it! You do a wonderful job creating images and describing two beautiful, feminine women and the erotic attraction between them. I especially love your attention to detail when describing the sexy, seductive outfits they wore - Is there anything hotter than two 'lipstick' lesbians in lingerie, stockings and stiletto heels?!?
Thanks, and please keep writing!
I think the scene where they enter the bedroom, Sara talks dirty, and Cat's dress falls to the floor - almost of it's own volition - is the single most awesome thing babylez has ever written.
There are sexier moments, there are more touching moments, and there are more dramatic moments, but for sheer artistry this one takes the prize. I am in awe.
And every time I read this story, I discover something new and wonderful.
I loved your Sara and Caitlin story. Please give us part 3 soon.
. . . with everyone else's comments. Great story, please keep it going.
I absolutely loved it(and all your other stories). These two ladies made me so wet. Oh, please continue this lovely story.
Once again, wonderful job, and so incredibly sexy. I can really see the improvement from the first chapter - the story flows far smoother without changes in perspective. My only complaint this time is that it was so short! Please hurry up with the next installment.
Iris
. . . to what's already been said. A wonderful story--one of the best I've read on Literotica.
Very erotic & this story is just getting better! I'm hanging on every word!
Great writing, showing quite realistically how the two women continue to build their relationship, both sexually and otherwise. However, to this reader, at least, the intensity of the sex isn't quite up to what it was in the first chapter. I am still eager to see what happens when their relationship is found out by Sara's husband and Caitlin's mom.