Caleb Woke Up Ch. 05

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Caleb reached up and grabbed onto her breasts, and sort of kneaded them, twisting the nipples. He pulled himself up so he could suck on her nipple.

"Oh my God Caleb. You feel amazing. My body is on fire."

She stopped bouncing and did more of a gyration while she lifted his chin and gave him a soul melting kiss.

"You are the best fuck, ever," she said, and then she started bouncing again even more wildly.

He didn't want it to end. He wasn't sure when he would get another chance like this with this sex goddess.

But the experience was too much for him. And she sensed it.

"Yes, cum inside me Caleb. Cum for me. I want it. I want it. Yes. yes."

Caleb put up a valiant fight, but he couldn't hold out. He released his warm jets inside her, and she immediately reacted, screaming at the top of her lungs, "I Love You!" before passing out.

***

She was affectionately known among a discrete circle of men, ex-boyfriends and their roommates, as a screamer. But she had never screamed like this before.

***

Caleb continued to inject her with his fluids, and she collapsed because the pleasure was too intense. She passed out into his arms as Caleb held on tight while he finished in her. He kissed her shoulder, and held onto her relishing the feeling of her bare back and ass.

Whew. I could learn to like this.

The impossible had happened. He almost felt like crying. Things were too perfect.

At some level, he realized that she was probably several years too old to make this work, and light years out of his league, but he didn't care. Right here, right now, was all that mattered, and he wasn't going to do anything to break the spell. He just basked in her being, holding her and lightly caressing her body, and apply light kisses to whatever skin was available.

Then he had a thought and chuckled.

Some stud I am. Every time I have sex with a woman, they fall asleep.

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netgnosticnetgnosticalmost 2 years ago

You will be successful if you use canned pineapple in your Jell-O. But as you said, fresh won't work.

nighthawk22204nighthawk22204almost 5 years ago
Never Too Much Bacon

especially if you're cumming several times a day. Hope Ming and Gretchen both have bacon in stock and plan to include it in their menus whenever the novice comes to visit.Love this very creative, original story, Thanks!!

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
thank you for letting him be more aware and awake

I also appreciate your sense of humour. especially the last line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A Wonderful Story

This is truly a Great Story, well told, with a story line that makes everything seem inevitable, and somehow Right. Looking forward to how Caleb will cope with both his sister and his mom at home, and again with Ming back at the church. By the way, the beautiful Gretchen is a real joy to include in Caleb's education. Thank you again.

Arcticwolf211Arcticwolf211about 10 years ago
Awesome!

Great story, and I loved the Tesla comment thrown in there. :-)

ChasPChasPalmost 12 years ago
Looking forward to Ch 6 ...

Good plotline Ch 1 through 5, and I agree w/ others that "hiring" a copy editing VE would be a wise move.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Very good series so far. I like the depravity with the pastor's wife in the church. I can't wait to read the chapter where he finally gets Anna. Keep it up, I look forward to reading more.

McBaconMcBaconalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks Anon - Jiggling

I chose wiggling as a nod to the fact that her breasts are more petite. But it probably doesn't fit as well. Jiggling would probably be a better word for it. Thanks.

Being a novice author, I just realized I have the power to correct my work, and I have a lot I would like to address to make the stories more readable. It looks a little tedious, but I guess I don't mind the tedium. Looks like I need to copy the story, reset the italic and bold markup, and submit with corrections by story page.

Still working through how to pick an editor. I am studying the editors forum. Do they come to me, or do I need to man up and ask them to dance? I started a thread. Looks like I am the wall flower.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Good, Minor Correction

Good story. Keep it up please.

You say Mrs. Anderson's breasts were 'wiggling.' The word you probably should have used is 'jiggling.'

McBaconMcBaconalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks for all the feedback.

agaren - Thanks. My writing skills are a little better than in chapter 1.

Chapter 6 is basically, "Mom tucks him in". I think I made a final pass. Should be out in a couple fo days I think. Not sure if it ends up in here or incest.

JohnShade - I agree, you can never have enough bacon.

Garg22 - Thanks for the feedback and advice. You and I are of similar minds. It took me 6 chapters to progress through 18 hours. At this rate, you might see some ninjas by chapter 420.

But really, progression will probably change. I hate it when the plot gets in the way of the sex, so we'll need to see about that. I have decided to let my Schwanz make more of the story choices. But there are definitely some evil pricks out there who are looking for the necklace.

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