by countrycal
It's beyond tragic and so sad to think that any husband would or could ever burn the person they love with a cigarette. 5 stars.
Treating someone with respect is definitely going to improve their self esteem completely!
I really enjoyed this as a beginning. I hopebthe rest is just as good. Thanks.
So good, I'm grateful to have found your story. No one is perfect in this life but striving should be enough :) Cheers Yoron.
For all the cynical folks that think they are beyond feeling, that sex is just physical and beyond emotion this was a poignant reminder of what is beneath the skin. It was heart touching and tenderly erotic. Thank you Cal.
Perfect, what a hell of a story. Thanks. Somehow I hope you write a second chapter, but I don't want it to ruin the first one.
I really loved this story - slightly erotic, and very touching. Very well-written and beautiful!
The story was as beautiful as it was sexy. Will she ever call? I hope so.
The feeling that I was a part of the story was intense. Not only a good story-line, but very well written. I am not a professional in this business, but I am an avid reader. In my opinion, you should consider writing novels.
Very nice. I enjoyed it. A noble man helping a damsel in distress. Nice touch.
It had a sweet sadness to it and the hope of some happiness for this character.