by countrycal
It had a sweet sadness to it and the hope of some happiness for this character.
Very nice. I enjoyed it. A noble man helping a damsel in distress. Nice touch.
The feeling that I was a part of the story was intense. Not only a good story-line, but very well written. I am not a professional in this business, but I am an avid reader. In my opinion, you should consider writing novels.
The story was as beautiful as it was sexy. Will she ever call? I hope so.
I really loved this story - slightly erotic, and very touching. Very well-written and beautiful!
Perfect, what a hell of a story. Thanks. Somehow I hope you write a second chapter, but I don't want it to ruin the first one.
For all the cynical folks that think they are beyond feeling, that sex is just physical and beyond emotion this was a poignant reminder of what is beneath the skin. It was heart touching and tenderly erotic. Thank you Cal.
So good, I'm grateful to have found your story. No one is perfect in this life but striving should be enough :) Cheers Yoron.
I really enjoyed this as a beginning. I hopebthe rest is just as good. Thanks.
Treating someone with respect is definitely going to improve their self esteem completely!
It's beyond tragic and so sad to think that any husband would or could ever burn the person they love with a cigarette. 5 stars.