All Comments on 'California Dreamin' Pt. 02'

Really enjoyed the flow of both chapters. Very nice indeed.

A wonderful, passionate and erotic love story! Bravo!!

This is amazing!! It would be great if you continued this story

Could have done with a bit of drama. Perhaps they could have fallen out, only to get back together again. You didn't mention what age they were, it would have helped to paint a picture of what they would have looked like. I still liked it; please write more interracial romance

5 stars, favorite story, favorite author, love it!!!!