All Comments on 'Call Out Your Name Ch. 03'

Sweet and sexy. But omg, what's up with the mad stalker dude?

Such nice pacing here with S & J going slow and getting to know each other before hopping into bed.

Ah, young love to think it conquers all.

5* from me.

Cliff, nice work with incorprating song lyrics into your story. Mumford & Sons is one of my favrite bands.

Shane's parents are a piece of work but I do like his Uncl and Jesse seems grounded and close to his Mom.

Thanks for giving us the story quickly w/ fast chapaters and no waiting.

hot date and wicked sense of humor between the boys :)

Hot and sweet all in one:-) I just hope Jesse's stalker isn't about to ruin anything. Shane should talk more with his uncle about his living arrangement. Carl seems okay with him being gay/bi. So maybe he could help Shane find another place to live.

Great work cliff... :-)

This is my favorite story on Lit but then most of yours end up my favorites. They haave such an adorable romance between them.

They are so cute and how romantic a perfect anniversary

Well done mate.

It was a very sweet chapter. Shane really did a nice job planning their anniv. and the night for Jesse. Part of me knows that not many h.s. relationships last, but they really do seem to compliment each other well. The only thing that bothered me is why would you ever ignore a latter that is threatening to make you bleed? That just seems monumentally stupid to not decide to be better safe than sorry. But, I guess if they did get help, it would make it less dramatic when the bad happened. Look forward to more. Thanks for the quick posts.

I am really enjoying this story. I was afraid after you pulled your other stories off Lit you would not post any more here and I would miss your work. I must admit, first time stories are my guilty pleasure! This one ranks up there in my top 10 list!

Thanks for all you do!

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A nice, well-crafted story. You got me hooked.

Beautiful sex scene. It was very well written. I'm glad that you allowed Shane and Jessie to fall in love first.

that was soooo cute! and so well crafted. I loved that you let them take it slow and let them fall in love and other that other gooey squishy stuff. Really well planned and executed. hot stuff.

god that Mumford and sons song selection was perfection sigh no more...i love this story and the pace is just right for these two i wish shane's mom was less of a bitch and his dad such a selfish prick but all in all a great story..sigh no more no more,one foot in sea one on shore,my heart was never pure...and you know me...you know me

They are so cute together. A perfect teenage couple and Shane is so romantic.

Don't know why I hadn't found this earlier but better late than never. The characters are wonderful and the sex on the boat was very hot. Fearful about the stalker though. Hope he doesn't ruin a good romance.