All Comments on 'Callie Submits'

Sorry, Vegasdude. I tried and tried, but I couldn't find more than a smidgen of reality in your tale. It really could use a little work.

If Sweetie and Hubby are fairly young and recently married (unlikely due to his job level) this is simply very unlikely (1:1000)! Otherwise, it is damn near impossible (1:100,000)!

Great fantasy, however (except for the ass2mouth part! Potentially fatal!)

This piece doesn't need a little work - it needs to be trashed completely, and a different story written

Hint: it is not required - even counterproductive - to give the characters completely unlikely physical characteristics:

" ... [Carrie] stands 5 Ft 8 inches and weighs around 125. She had long, shapely legs (undoubtedly from all the working out she does), a narrow waist and full, firm 38-inch tits ..."

Yeah, right. She would have Barbie's impossible figure

And of course, what would a story be (other than more plausible) if the guy didn't have an

"...erect 9-inches... "

Really, really bad

Nothing more needs to be said

Over the top of believability.

A week later hubby was served with divorce papers, when he confronted Callie she said that she now belonged to James and his huge black cock and he was her master now. She smiled said, “sorry you should never have let me see you submissive wives stories”. Now I like being submissive especially with James who shares me with Stan and Mark. Then she suggested that maybe if hubby pleaded maybe James would share her once in a while with hubby. 😂