All Comments on 'Can I Find My Way Back Home?'

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Orion623Orion623almost 16 years ago
Good Writing

Well written with a hint of mystery to the story. It was very interesting until the reason she left home was revealed. The misunderstanding she experienced was somewhat believable as was her leaving the house but her abandoning her daughter as well as her husband requires too much of a suspension of disbelief. Nevertheless the characters were nicely developed making the story an enjoyable read.

BigFtHunterBigFtHunteralmost 16 years ago
This is great.

Sexy this is by far your best work. I loved it.

Zeb40Zeb40almost 16 years ago
I liked it.

A lot. In spite of the plot inconsistincies pointed out by others. All I ask from a story is that it give me pleasure. This one did. Thanks.

Tearsofsorrow2Tearsofsorrow2over 15 years ago
Sadness

There is a beauty in sadness. We do not know how someone will react to perceived infidelity. She felt the need to run, a weak response. But no less a defense mechanism. Their road will be a long and hard one back to what they had. She lost faith and must find it again. He must give her time to prove that faith. Nothing has been done that can not be undone.

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