by Geordiegal
Fill in the "friend" and "lover" characters a bit. Give them names.
Looking forward to the next part! and yes, names would definitely bring this story out to life more! Great job though!
That was really great start. Please let there be another chapter!!!!!! Truely amazing!!
are. But it's a good start.
Thank you to all who read this - its my first published story.
Even more thanks to those who left feedback here or sent it to me. All feedback taken onboard.