All Comments on 'Cancel the Wedding'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
One of the best I've read on this site

Very hot, very original. Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

beautiful! sequel desperately required!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Amazing,please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
f5

complete turn off. thanks for wasting my time

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Stupidity run amok.

Excuse me while I answer my doorbell. Darth Vadar is here and he wants to explain to me I'm his child. Well that's as believable as your pile of manure.....

AmbivalenceAmbivalenceabout 9 years ago
Um... W. O. W...

That was something... I must admit I was worried for a bit in there that it'd turn out (annoying twist attempt) that he had a twin or look alike cousin that NO ONE thought to mention until just at the wedding... Glad you didn't go that route - that kind of thing pisses me off...

But as seductions go, this one was fatal... and hot. Of course, now that he's history - maybe even in prison - have to worry about her becoming a slut because he really DID trip her triggers...

betrayedbylovebetrayedbylovealmost 7 years ago

I can't believe I read this. Just curious. The little sister did save her big sister from a bad marriage.

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