All Comments on 'Candy'
by sexyisabelle
- 18 Comments
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoIt would have received 100% had Craig not changed his name to Carl for one paragraph.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoSorry, I did that on the last story too. Deciding between names, and then my mind forgets which I chose.
Anyone know if there's any way to edit after submitting?
Love,
Is
Anonymousalmost 18 years agomentioned in today's Author's Hangout New story review thread.
Newstartalmost 18 years agoJust lovely. As an older lover I really appreiated this.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoA really terrific read. You are a very talented author, Isabelle.
LustHosealmost 18 years agoWell done, the relationship evolves nicely without complications.
Bravo!
walkingeaglealmost 18 years agoExcellent! Well written, and e3xtremly erotic! Great job!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI love older men. Their touch, the way they smell, the passion they put into making love. It's so much more orgasmic. Who would want a boy when you could have a man who could turn any simple conversation into something interesting and sexual without even making it obvious.
Good job! keep writing
Anonymousabout 17 years agovery sexy, i am an older man. very explicit. another one like this and i'll come in my pants.
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoThe description of the slow easiness of their relationship is typical of the method by which an older gentleman is able to seduce a young maiden in his life. She completely discloses the willingness and desire of the young woman which must be present before a successful seduction can occur. Most girls, as opposed to young women, are not interested in a wrinkled face because of the embarrassment which they might feel if seen by their peers in public with an older man. The story discloses the author's sensitivity to the subtleties of a wonderful pairing.
Well done!
SweetDreamStoriesabout 15 years agoThe Craig/Carl name change, that happened for one tiny paragraph, was quite distracting. I've read the feedback here, and saw where you said "you forgot what name you used", however it seems hard to believe. Three paragraphs all next to each other went Craig, Carl, Craig just tht fast.
Overall the sex scenes weren't that bad.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoLove how sweet she is. Nothing better than sweet and sexy. Good story. Any chance for a part two?
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoStarting it at an ice cream parlor was a cool idea. It struck me as pretty original. And then you pay off the sweet tooth part with the chocolate metaphor.
bigurn10 months agoA decent story, although the sex scenes were... slightly... over descriptive. Too much detail becomes a bit boring. Yet, all in all, it boiled down to a FWB story. No real connection, just a " Spread 'Em and Let 'Em " tale... lol 3 stars!
