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"You're the sexiest woman I've ever known. Of course I'd love to."
The brunette allows herself a smirk.
"Would you like some now?"
Paul sputters.
"I guess there's a first time for anything."
"Let me freshen up," Magge tousles his hair. "I wouldn't want to keep you waiting."
THE END
- COMMENTS
PulpWyattover 9 years agoI like that this story has an arc. I, too, found its scenes and ideas a little disjointed, but, more than that, I like that we get a conclusive ending. My favorite part is that I couldn't tell where the story was heading. Unpredictability always adds a refreshing sense of adventure.
Draconus03over 10 years agothe story was rather confusing and did not seem to flow together into a cohesive plot so much as drift from one scene to the next unrelated scene without making alot of sense.
