All Comments on 'Caregiver'

Love how you describe things. Especially the house in the beginning. plz keep writing.

I really liked this story, and would like to see a bit more to be honest. The whole possessed/cursed/haunted house thing. I would like to know more about it.

You kept things on edge until the very last. Great.

Thanks

Really liked the storie line but got a bit confused it was all sort of blurred together and hard to understand and i didnt get it how the baby went from infant to toddler the a 16 year old boy just was confusing then i dont get how a suposed baby or toddler can jump of a bench top and is spos to get it self back in its crib by its self, it dosnt make sence i really liked the idea but u just have to establish all the characters propley.

Jorjiah xxx.

Nice E. I don't usually do this genre, but I really liked how you built it up over and over. Very nice tease before the payoff. Thanks!