All Comments on 'Carnal Cruise Ch. 03'

That was another great Chapter you wrote about Tom and his adventures on the cruise. I like how he was able to take Shirley's virginity the night before. I can hardly wait to see what you do with him in the next chapter. All three chapters have been good.

Fucking hot. No other way to frame it, mate.

WOW MY FRIEND,, WOW

I ACTUALLY COULD FEEL EACH PLEASEURE, EACH CLIMAX AND EACH FEELING OF ALL YOUR CHARACTERS.

MY DEAR GORAN, NEVER STOP WRITING! IF YOUR READERS GET 1/2 AS MUCH PLEASURES AS DO, WOW

THANKS MY DEAR FRIEND!

MIKE

you really should finish this -- and where can i get a ticket for this cruse line!

My dear friend Goran..wow you made this one feel so real..thanks my friend.

Dragonfly