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floaturboatfloaturboatover 13 years ago
Great ending to an excellent series!

Jamie,

You did it again. Your writing is vivid and very believable. I enjoyed this tremendously. I can't wait to read more of your work.

lil_cockteaselil_cockteasealmost 13 years ago
Wonderful!

Very well-written, and I particularly liked that the girl wasn't just a mannequin to be used and fucked. She had her own dark desires, even if she didn't particularly like to acknowledge them, and I love it. Keep on writing, Jamie. These are great.

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A writer by profession; cougar by inclination. I like passionate, sweaty, rough sex, so that's what I write about. Hope you enjoy.

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