All Comments on 'Carol's Story Ch. 04'

becoming more over the top, as one reader put it, with each chapter. Props are still due because yhb does say it's a fictional account of a real woman. If he writes for himself, that's cool. If he writes for others to enjoy, he should tone it down a little.

I don't write for all readers not because I don't want to but because I can't. Readers' tastes vary too widely for a single story to appeal to everyone. Admitedly, this tale's audience is more restricted than most because it was originally written for an audience of one (two if I count myself). I've placed it here so that others, few as they may be, might enjoy it as well. Thank you again for the comment. Blaine

It works for me

... but because Blaine was in it I found some good in it. The way you treated Carol bothered me. I was wondering why you had to be so mean to her - as if the balance of the relationship wasn't clear by the very nature of it. She was willing to do anything for you. I guess that's the part of it that I don't understand. Carol adores you - worships you - or am I wrong? Are you only a cock to her like she's a mouth to you? Is all she cares about your big black cock? The way she went after the other black guy muddied the waters for me.

Making Carol give head to a stranger - that hurt me, but apparently not Carol, so who am I to complain? She seems to revel in being a slut at this point, swimming in a puddle of semen and bodily fluids like that. The degradation of it all. I liked her much better when she was giving herself to you and you alone, doing anything and everything you wanted her to do to you. Taking your ejaculations in her mouth, on her face. That I understand.

You don't like pubic hair, I take it. I have it - not a lot - but it's there. I shaved it many many years ago once, and I was scratching like a hound for a month afterward when it grew back in. Never again.

You're still the best, Blaine, even when you're not as nice as you can be.

was to her liking, Marie. Just because it's in the story doesn't mean it excited her, or me for that matter. I was trying to understand the boundaries of what aroused her. I was looking for my own limits of what I'd be willing to do with a woman.

The treating her a little roughly is something all of us have experienced to one degree or another, either being over solicitous to someone we wanted to please or played a little harder to get than we actually felt to see how far the other person would go to please us.

Carol and I had been apart for some time when I came back into her life unexpectedly. Some feelings she'd thought were gone came rushing back, and yes, that was the cocksucking. She did want my cock and I strung her along a little to heighten her desire.

That was the scenario I was writing. I pushed it because I wanted to see how far I'd go and what her reaction would be. Some women would throw up if they imagined being put in a room with a glory hole. Some get wet and excited at the thought of having an anonymous man offer his cock to her. I can't explain why.

I read somewhere where a guy said he was grossed out the first time he heard about French kissing. What the fuck? You open your mouth and a girl sticks her tongue in it? How many kids think that's the coolest thing they ever heard of the first time they're told about it?

But somewhere along the line, things that repulsed us sometimes turn into exciting us. Who, at first, would think that licking someone's asshole arousing? What I know is that for some things, somewhere along the way, their erotic value switches from something I wouldn't want to do to something I love doing.

Fantasy is a great way to explore those things.

Blaine

You hit upon something there at the end. You're amazing. I think you may have psychic powers or something like that.

As for your comment - you're right, of course. I'm projecting myself into the part of your character and making judgements based on that, and that isn't right or fair to the story.

I need to start treating them more as what they are, fiction, and enjoy them for that.

XXX

Marie

To me the commanding nature of Blaine did something to me - permission to let it happen and to enjoy it. To be taken to a sex shop - where I hadn't been at that time - and to be so wild

The story still speaks to a deep part of me and makes me cum off reading it

yes!

my body reacts to this so much