All Comments on 'Case Dismissed'

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Absolutely what a cheating whore deserves

Too much hate in the World... too many men (sad sack wimps) getting around as though they own the woman their with!!!

Boy was this a crapola and stank too. I guess this scribbler has a mission, to make up just piles of crap and get high from the stank. Dude?!

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Helluva story.

Of course, when her parents figure out both of their daughters are missing and the talk to the housekeeper...

I know the author didn’t mean it to be but the story was so absurd it was hilarious!

He should have walked in on her sister, back handed her face and told her to get out and never come back. Then informed her sisters husband. It is down to him he let it play out when he could have saved the situation. Very poor writing.

Pathetic

whore and a jerk wimp.

1st page was good, then you went all typical LW writer stupid and ruined it.

After hearing her interview (which was so impressively idiotic I knew I wouldnt last much past that point and...tadah, I didnt) with every little detail of her affair which would never be spelled out as such. This was clearly a wimp, limp wristed bitch story (guessing you modeled the MC after yourself?).

Hopefully you dont bother wasting your life with any more worthless attempts at writing again.

How disgusting can Murphy get? Well I guess not as disgusting as licking the cum deposits of his whore moms clients from her cunt and ass every night while growing up!

Wimp husband.

Couldn't read all of it.

What a P.O.S. this story was, a total waste.

Could have been much better. I agree with other commenters, suggesting sexual slavery and murder as apparently justified for the wife and s/i/l because of their infidelity ruins the story.

It started out as a good story, but the ending is quite BAD.

Started good but JFC you went so over the top stupid with her you ruined it completely.

Sorry this turned into sh*t, plain and simple.

In perfect agreement with most everyone. This is just one bad effort in infidelity. But he was one cold mother, he didn't give in to her. But she dug her own grave, so she deserves what she reaped. No happy ending here.

bad idea

It is one thing to punish cheaters and an entire different thing to support murder and slavery as the author does here.

Crime is easy to write about. Good authors don't need that.

She and the sister got what they deserved in the end, a shallow grave.

Cheaters never prosper.

Nothing good to say about this story. One of your worst.

in this deplorable effort. Boy, that doctor was one selfish and cold mutha. Not even one star

How can the case be dismissed if the prime suspect is missing? She was setup by her sister, so I can understand Flo becoming a prisoner whore. I don't know if she deserved that kind of punishment. Normally I'm all for revenge on the cheater, but in this case I'm not sure.

Worst story ever. No matter what she was his kids mother and she was setup that deserved some help he should be beaten a raped for not trying to help.

Not a very happy story. One can only hope that Stella and Flo ended up the land fill.

yet the lawyer still must be paid, TK U MLJ LV NV

Cold hearted husband. She is mobster's whore and mobster threatened to kill him.

She had her chance when he forgave her for Max.

Nice to know you like sharing.

I no longer have to quit screwing your wife before you come home...you can pull up chair and take notes.

Old argument over size vs technique.

Sucks to be the husband because I have both!

Really cold hearted husband. He should also be in the landfill.

The whole idea story and contents are sick. Nothing there to bring a smile to anyone's face.

Piss poor story!

He will have to do it pro bono

Why would husband spend all his savings to help cheating wife?????????

... waste of time to have written it...

she is beginning to stray and on she goes, TK U MLJ LV NV

How is a regular guy supposed to take on a mobster scorpio??

Sid should never have taken Stella back after finding out about Max. However, she was the mother of his children and he should have rescued her from Sally. She certainly is dead and he is as responsible as Sally for her fate. He is also complicit in Max's death since he knows Sally killed him and could get him arrested for the murder. Once Stella was safe, he could divorce her and move on with a clear conscience.

Garbage, nothing left to say......

You have athing for spineless husbands

Do you look in mirror while writing these characters

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What a spineless husband. His wife was clearly made to do things against her will (I'd bet that her first drink with Max was drugged). He never made any attempt to find her for some form of reconciliation later.

When she fled to the mobster Sally, and he took her in I could see that. I could see him keeping her a while and then turning her out to make some money. But locking her up? No way; he'd be guilty of kidnapping, and for what, a middle aged woman? No he keeps her a while then he puts her on the street. She's done, fried, too ashamed to go home. One night she shows up in the emergency room at husband's hospital. She's riddled with diseases, not STDs, but Hepatitis and shit. She's a worn out old hag. He sees her and shrugs. He thinks, "Too bad, just too too bad." He's already divorced her and found someone else. Life goes on.

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After everything this whore did the first time he still took her back. Which is just weak. I mean she did every disrespectful and hateful thing a woman could do to her husband. But he still forgave her. Then this whore has sex with her own sister, just a few feet from him barely a few months or whatever later. And even though he still forgives and practically begs her to stay home and not to fuck Sally(who she knew all along was the killer) on one of the rare weekends he isn't working, trying to pay of the debts they have because of the big house she wanted and the legal bills she caused,she still does it. Now months later after confronting her and finally kicking her to the curb. She 's back asking for money and protection from the same murderer she was cheating on him with, and endangering the lives of his kids. What possible reaction could he have other than to just go on with his life and forget about this bitch? If he talks to the cops or lawyers the MOB would just kill him and his kids. It's the mob people, not the big kid at school. You cant just tell the principal.

This was a disgusting tale liked only by the standard burn the bitch crowd who approve of any level of punishment the author can dig out of his bowels. What kind of a mind comes up with such utter bullcrap?

Yes, this really sucked.

Why wouldn't he call the Police or the lawyer that defended her? Either would have been happy to throw Sally into prison for years and years. What about their children? Didn't they want to know where their Mother was? Did she have no one else that might ask about her? Like her parents or some of her friends? Same thing goes for her sister. Why would he lie to her husband? This whole mess made no sense. Not even for fiction. Really badly written and unfinished junk.

The worthless husband should be with them! To even consider for a second, letting her walk down the same street as him, let alone letting her back in the house, after the first time, makes his just as worthless as the human garbage he married!

" "I'm only ten years out of medical school and it took me four of them to pay off my educational debts."- Four years? Ha! More like 10-20 years. Two Stars.

He was supposed to kill three mobsters? People who made their bones killing straights like him? He was a doctor, not a navy seal, didn't seem to have a gun or even know how to use one. No, the stupid whore got herself into that situation and put her family at risk thereby. She also spent all of her husband's money during the first trial. Tell you what, if you people are so brave, go find a big Italian guy in New York and slap him in the face. I didn't think so.

One thing to fight to protect your wife and children, but to fight and die for a whore. Nah.

did the sisters get what they deserved? who knows, there's too much in the soup. I truly believe that the person offended should decide the punishment, but in this case, the bad guy won hands down. did hubby make out in the end? maybe. threatening his kids should give anyone an idea how to handle these guys, since there no limits in their threats, there shouldn't be any doubt, that hubby should strike first and quickly, and get all their families, without remorse.

Man up and at least call the Police. Or really man up and bury the prick 6 ft under. What a spineless turd.

Sorry but hubby was first and for most a fucking asshole when they threat-end his children he should have killed them all

Hard lines but sometimes you have to pay for what you do. I want mercy, myself, not justice.

It ends well...for him.

Tell you what: That story is nothing...open end, triumphing villains etc. and a husband - as it seems proudly - mentionens how cheap his divorce had come.

I´ve read better stories written by you. Thos one denies your talent. Poor excuse.

The story is finished...Finished and - so is Stella and Flo!!!

If they don't eventually end up in the swamps they'll find themselves in Mexico going from a brothel and then finally to an animal ranch, make movies and then end up as feed for the pigs.

The ending was appropriate and easily explanatory!

Thanks!

pretty good story up to the end. It sucked.

but the evidence is still there, TK U MLJ LV NV

Geez I thought JPB was bad about not finishing some of his stories. But the ending to this story takes the cake. He doesn't call the cops? He does nothing? One of the all time WORST endings ever.

Can these writers ever finish a story????

I liked the plot just not the ending which ended very abruptly.

I would have hoped that the husband had a good plan to nail sally and Flo !

This is an average women in the world today according to the stats, a piss on her grave woman type the kind thats so misunderstood. lesbo bi trash

wimpy ass man.

First, as we all found out, she was set up by Flo to be seduced by Max. It was vague but the suggestion that her special drink was aphrodesically(?) special seemed obvious!

She totally got off on it, Max was very good and when he showed up at her home and took her, before she could render any resistance (even if she would - he was good), it was all over. All over the house, all day and no turning back, it would be all the time.

Okay, she was seduced, controlled, was now into a hot affair, enjoying it and the rest is all spelled out.

For the sake of the children and great sex, hubby did give a little, but Flo pushed her buttons for a sex get together with Sally, the result - her life came to an end. She couldn't say no, wanted it all, enjoyed the thrill and we all know what happened next.

NY, NJ - they were already in the thirties and doing 2-4 guys a day, some video, possibly some parties - by the time they were 40 it would show badly on them and then, who knows - they know too much???

Thanks Murphy, good story!

Alhough I didn't like the ending, I guess she did get what she really wanted.

Fucking all day long and man after man fucking her is what she had become.

Not wife material in the least, and Flo did get what was coming to her too.

Thanks for the read.

I don't find this an inherently flawed story. Granted...considering murphy621 predilections, it was a bit cookie cutter. Hapless man blindsided by wife's infidelity, the Reveal, where it is shown that he is a pale imitation of a Real Cocksman and wifey was a whore for her bull...all told in as explicit and painful details as possible (because that was so relevant to a criminal defense... rolleyes)

However shit happens. Could a mobster act this way? I guess...sure. Why he would want to trap and hold a middle aged housewife who was getting fat as her personal slut is ONE of many questions I have. Why her sister hates her so much (a bit thin for her motivations...but okay...it's his story)

What did the husband owe this woman? Little. Yeah, it would be nice if he could have Karate Kidded the three mobsters (who let him live). However, his reaction was painfully realistic. (Why did they let him live again? Not sure)

It is a damaged story, but not critically flawed (Another story comes to mind immediately this week which was worse).

No one to like...but I don't like a lot of people and they have their stories too.

Page 1: parents bail her out

Page 3: less than a year later her only living relative is Flo.

Not to mention the numerous grammatical errors and typos.

she wasn't drugged, she before she cheated with Max, all she had to do was say "NO".

Really no reason to read after the first page. I guess you guys don't like things like law and order. So the husband wasn't an ex SEAL driving a supped up mustang or some other bullshit that would let him take on a couple of mob goons and the second guy she cheated with didn't get any payback. If you think about it though the person who cuckolded him was actually his Sister in law, she set out to see that her sister became a whore.

Too bad this doesn't happen to all willing cheaters, of both genders. A cheater dooming themselves is way more satisfying than taking any revenge.

Seems like a waste of time reading a story with no pay off. Such a shame this could have been a 5 instead of a 2. What about the murder trial multiple story lines were abandoned during your story we lost track what the story was about?? Seems like different stories glued together. Ah what the hell here is a 5 star

Because Hubby didn't do anything wrong. Even if she was setup by her sister, the slut still choose to cheat on her husband so everything that happened after that was on her head and her head only.

Why should a father risk his life and his kids lives to get a cheating cunt out of the mess she made for herself.

Never thought I would feel sorry for the cheating wife. Lets recount, shall we. Set up by her sister, drugged, framed for murder, set up by her sister, abandoned by her husband, held captive, prostituted, blackmailed and finally kidnapped.

Adultery isn't a crime; but her husband is an accessory to kidnapping which IS a crime. So, remind me again why he's supposed to be the good guy?

The first page was riveting. Fresh and engrossing with a nice efficiency of words. Then it took a turn for the stupid. By the end there was nobody to root for and all realism was gone.

In most BTB stories the other man gets beat up, sometimes very badly, but she walks away unscratched, poorer but unscratched. Here both are dead, and the snake that set it up also dead. Husband is innocent. Nice.

Strange ending. The husband is better off without the whore. Still a lousy tale.

Strictly speaking, as a story there is no one to like. They are all pond scum. Why did you do that?

By murphy621.

It was fine story up untill the mobster entered the house and threatened his kids. But its your story Murph and I enjoyed it.

Not sure what can be done with this.

No heroes just mobsters,stethoscope wearing pigskin-addicted dolts and the suggestible repressed house-Frau sluts as convention swirls down the drain. Hubris for hubris's sake...oh right this is a porn site. What can one do bit hrug, sigh and deposit soiled Kleenex at bottom of trash bin?

It was interesting until that shitty ending. They would not leave him alive with that knowledge. He would be buried with them. And not go to the FBI with the story makes him just another scum bag.

someone needs to fix this story! Make it better please!

Enough said.

How any rational person could pen such a piece of trash is incredible. But, than, this is Murphy621, which explains it.

He's a doctor, he could have killed her any number of ways and gotten away with it. What a maroon (yes, I saw that cartoon also) taking the whore back after he initially found out.

...after all, he didn't set up the mess. Just a dumb doctor trying to live his life. In addition, how many fathers really would try and do anything to rescue a self-made whore when that attempt would place his own kids in danger?

Going to police wouldn't solve anything. Hell, he could end up in witsec and no longer being able to be a doctor.

However, the ending really did fall flat. Not sure why...

Your story had drama and a good plot; the situation may or may not be very original but is was well set up. It had a big emotional impact.

It also had a great ending, but the ending wasn't set up as well as it deserved to be. It just seemed like there should have been a bit "More" to the story.

Four stars -- a really good job.

The man that threatens someone's children takes an early grave.

You made the husband worse than his slut wife, that's all I have to say on this.

For just a brief moment I had thought the wife was drugged due to the contrast in her behaviour - alas it was not to be. Then it became confusing with a flow of names introduced. I am still not sure if Sally was a woman or a guy, thinking maybe it was an abbreviation for a guy. Either way the story went downhill from there.

You open to case dismissed, but end with Sally owning her under threat to her kids. It doesn't match up.

Well for starters you really do need an editor, but that's a detail. I think you made everything too black and white, it would have been much better to make the characters more nuanced. As to the ending, white slavery (enslaving women to be prostitutes) is an ugly thing, and at a minimum, he should have reported it to the cops. Had he foreseen the arrival of the mob,it would have been noble if he could have gotten her free. Oh well. Look forward to your next story

King of 'Burn The Bitch' stories. Only problem? No one to tell it (who could or would be able to tell it!). Sally's goons take Hubby 'to swim with the fishes' in the trunk of the car. NO WAY in Hell that Sally leaves behind a witness!* Only five people left to tell the tale. Sally, two goons, Flo and Sweetie! The first three get fried (or gassed or leth-injected) if it comes out! The other two have THAT story and a bunch of even better stories to recount if they were EVER given a chance, but they will ALSO be feeding fishies as soon as their novelty wears off!

It is unfortunate that some people get SO wrapped up in their betrayal that they consider that ANY punishment is righteous. So letting a murdering mobster abduct the mother of your children (again) is OK. Thus, Hubby is within his rights to NOT report the abduction to the FBI! This is a HEINOUS way to think! For the author to present this as though it were a reasonable solution in this fictional tale is SICK!

* sounds like the kids were in the house as well...sorry!

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Sid was as fucked up as Stella and Flo. All it took her to make him forgive her slutty behavior with Max was a "promise not to cheat again" and lots of sex. I guess Sid's standards for a wife were pretty low/non-existent.

Loyalty, faithfulness, honesty, integrity - all foreign concepts for Sid the sap.

Oh, what happened to Stella's parents after they brought her home to Sid after being cleared of charges? QUOTE:"I lost it then. Flo, my sister, my only living relative set me up, she ruined my life." Guess they got rubbed out by the mob? Or did she discover she was adopted?

The story is not Revenge story, the story has a little fable story taste. Murphy accuses the husband for the tragedy............The wife had to escape from the husband to the Mob, because the husband burnt the all possibilties to live a low level. He closed the bankaccounts etc....Yes Consequence fable story.

I think everybody (except for ill people) is responsible for his/her decision, so I do not agree Murphy's idea. Naturally the husband had to divorce her and he began the divorce. He would have gotten the children custody (Mob friend wife is non fit mom). However a divorce must be civilized, if children are in the family. Only this thing in which I agree with Murphy. The husbands share the monthly money bank accounts untill the divorce in several revenge stories, if there are children in the families.

Although, the story started good; the middle and end seemed a disaster.

Someone has been reading too many old mob novels.

Hope he finds a good mother for his kids......

Good Consequence story! Murphy is like to MM, sometime h writes a good story, among the wrongs.

in her own fat.... Was well done and excellent analysis of the emotions of the husband caught in such circumstances.. I might even read so more Murphy stories.

Well done sir.

i loved the ending.

A spelling-binding story for all but the ending which was unbelievable and I unsatisfying.

stop writing fucktard your brain must be corroded by syphilis you've gotten in the 60ties whoring around.