All Comments on 'Cassie, an Elevator, and a Maid'

by wiintermute

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dirtyomandirtyomanover 10 years ago
Little confusing.

So much suckin & fuckin, in the last session it is a bit hard to keep track of who be suckn who, & whos on top.

Love the masses of ass's! I enjoyed the total read, but as stated got a little confused.

All the time waiting for him to be asked by Cassie, to fuck the maid. She deserved some cock too don't you think??

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
2nd person

2nd person limits your audience, I wasn't able to immerse myself into the story because i'm a male and you kept writing "your pussy".

the story was good otherwise (I didn't complete it).

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