by BlewWater69
Freaking great story man, you are truly a good writer
Love this series and the characters - hope the next chapter comes out soon.
ok i really liked the story pretty realistic. plus it had action even in it. just like to point out one thing to all the readers who want to get lost on islands like this. The only problem with blue lagoon like sceanarios is that there are actually a dammn lot of insects, mosquitos on these islands. getting naked there ain't a good idea. lol. You have been warned.
PS. Hey writer dude u have to finish the story when they get back! its pretty good story overall
I hope not, I think it needs an epilogue. Great chapter. Oh, and please update Nurse Jenny. Thanks for writing.
I really enjoyed reading this story, it was so realistic I could almost see it play out.
Have read this story from the start, and have really enjoyed it. Hope you will be continuing it. Thanks for a great read.
So good...thank you...can't wait to see what happens once they are back to civilization...
Very well written story.
I definitely hope you finish the story as you have done an excellent job of writing.