All Comments on 'Catching a Big One'

Very erotic the thought of being taken by a stranger.......Oh gawd!!

This read more like a play-by-play announcer than a story. Leave writing to WRITERS, and stick to your comic book collection.

ass w/o a name write about you!!!

don't ever think you done. It's dim wit like WWW tells us. But we all think of you are retar ass w/o a name a fag who sees a name he doesn't like or a story that has a good rating and then he beigs his little raving and ramping and gives oput low scores. yet, dimwit ass w/o a name has never written a damn thing so others may judge his works. he tell us he doesn't read the stories but then in his next breath hee tells everone why he thinks the story is bad. Poor little cock dim wit ass w/o a brain I mean name. Oh well one works just like the other. Die you fag you're mother doesnt even like you!!

I must say. True, your story doesn't really have a plot, but do most people read the short ones for a plot? My only slight objection is when the narrator says his asshole is "red." How would he know when he can't possibly see it? LOL. Otherwise I enjoyed it. Hope to read more from you. Best, Ken

a cute love tale.....ummmmmm

Have you been back to see him again? I would have gone to see him as often as possible, hot tops like that don't cum along all the time.