All Comments on 'Catching Mommy: Housewife Lesbians'

Victoria for the win, but I'd like to see an alternate ending with Olivia winning if your up for it.

Olivia and Victoria are both winners because they or will have shagged each other's mother. They have turned their mothers into carpet munchers, so why stop here. They should set up a dual Dom relationship and take many more MILF's with their slut mothers help.

Have to make it Victoria winning and completely astonishing Olivia & Katrina, etc. making them her sluts too.

I think Victoria should win. I like to see how olivia get humiliated and have to to submit.

It would be too predictable to see Victoria win. But, it would be really exciting to read about how Olivia had this master plan and was playing Victoria the whole way. Super hot story. Please keep writing.

Good story more please.To Bugger someone is arse fuck them. You aim for the cunt enter the arse you have made a mistake????? You have buggerd it . Doing diy when you hit your thumb with the hammer you are fucked and buggerd!!

Victoria should win. And Olivia should have to lick her ass.

Victoria should win

olivia

She's our heroine and must prevail. Thanks for a great series.

VICTORIA FTW!!!

Victoria

Victoria should definitely win over both Olivia and Katrina. Victoria didn't start this, Olivia did when she seduced Victoria's mom. She cannot be allowed to win.

Olivia

A bitch like olivia needs to be broken and trained to be an obedient slut/whore.

I'd love to see both girls get their endings, but if i had to choose I vote for Victoria.

I reckon you should do two separate stories for each outcome :) I'll be sad to see this series finish :'(

Victoria should definitely win over Olivia and Katrina.

Hello,

I would say give a big twist and let the Mom's of Victoria, Olivia and Katrina be the Mistresses of house and have their little slut daughters around their fingers.

Victoria submitting to Olivia would be the best 100%

I'm not sure that these are two characters who could defeat each other. The rivalry is simply too intense for either to give in, especially when neither has shown any weaknesses. Victoria has fantasized about pleasing Olivia, true, but she has also fantasized about Olivia pleasing her, which suggests the real issue is that she's attracted to Olivia. These are two girls who are so similar in nature that they are compelled towards one another. I think it would be more interesting (and exciting) to see a final series of moves in this game, each trying to outdo the other, until they realize that they have met their match: someone they must deal with as an equal. As a partner.

Victoria should win

Victoria should win she did dominate her own mother which is harder to do when you think about it and she has more going for her than the other chick

Victoria should win.

Victoria!

Victoria has to win

It would be hotter then ever for Victoria, thinking that she's such a dom, trying to challenge Olivia before Olivia puts Victoria in her true place.

It would be way hotter if Victoria ended up submitting to Olivia. She's already getting hot just thinking about it.

They should become girlfriends and make everyone their sluts

Victoria wants to lose to Olivia, she should be humiliated, collared and on her knees serving her in front of the whole school. And she'd love every second of being humiliated, she'll probably beg her to do it to her if this series doesn't finish soon. Great work.

Victoria must win!!

Victoria has to win!

Victoria all the way!!!!!!!!!!!

Victoria should be the final victor with all the bitches submitting!

victoria deserves to win olivia needs to be submissive

Count me in as a Victoria supporter. Olivia started it.

Victoria should make Olivia and Katrina both her sluts and have them fuck their own mothers to complete process

Victoria all the way since the other bitch wanna start shit without knowing who she is battling

Victoria all the way! Olivia should be totally humiliated.

Victoria for the win

Victoria for the win

Victoria should win

Victoria without a doubt (and us being English has nothing to do with our vote).

Olivia should win definately

you should make two endings one were Victoria is the victor and an alternate were Olivia is the victor.

you could have some really good plot points in both stories the one where Victoria wins could involve Olivia being betrayed by her close friend Katrina when she finds out her mother is a submissive lesbian slut and helps victory to dominate Olivia in the most erotically sweet revenge ever.

as for the one were Olivia is the victor you could have Victorias mother betray her on this day when she's being ruthlessly fucked by the two teens she unintentionally says her daughter name in the throws of passion and is ordered to explain more of the "seduction" of her when she spills the beans revealing her daughters plans thus ruining any chances Victoria had of success

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I would like to see Victoria Win.

Victoria. Olivia needs someone to put her in her place. Victoria should win.

Victoria!!!

Why not let Katrina or the brainy girl win?

Wouldn't that be the best ending?

All the popular and rich bitches submitting to the valedictorian?

Victoria wins. 'Nuf said.

Olivia sub to all

Let victor,is win

I say let Victoria win and make both Olivia and Kat her subs!!

Yes this sexy domme should win. With Olivia as her personal pet and becka her new gf.

Came across this series just before this story posted. I'm HOOKED!! Can't wait for the finale. Possible twist where both girls play dom/sub role to each other while mainting dom roles they already have in place. Again, OUTSTANDING!!

Olivia should be taken down a peg or two!!!

Its pretty clear the majority want it to end with Victoria as the HBIN (Head Bitch In Charge). But I say you should write the story making who you prefer the winner, but throw in some twists with it!

dear god let this young sultry English mistress win as well as make olivia and Kat become her personal pets

Olivia must win

Actually a tough call, it could go major hot either way. I guess if I have to chose it would be Victoria since we have seen more of her. If you have Olivia win you will have to do some stories about women she has seduced.

Is there a way they can both win? A tie maybe and then they team up to tear a swath through the women of their town. Think about it.

Victoria to win.

Great story can't wait un til Victoria wins

Something about Olivia really annoys me more than most antagonists. I would love to see her put in her place.

definately have to go with victoria to save her mothe

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I'd love to see Olivia crawling to Victoria's opened legs & eat out her cunt like a good slut should, (put the bitch in her place lol) I think if Victoria was to win the story can continue a bit longer. she would have 6 sluts to her disposal: Olivia, Katrina, June, Lauren, her mother, & Becka. PLEASE HAVE VICTORIA WIN. and continue the series sooner then alot later. thank u. :)

It may be too much to ask but it would be great to see two stories; one with Victoria dominating Olivia and another story with Victoria crawling between Olivia's legs.

I'm not knocking the story, but you've got so many characters, using so many names, it's getting a bit confusing. I'm considering using some kind of roster to keep track of who's who. You may have to provide a cast list at the beginning of each chapter in this series.

I disagree with previous comments. I think Olivia must win. I have not seen a weakness in Olivia, but Victoria clearly has a submissive streak. If Victoria wins, the story is very obvious since we have seen all her thoughts. However, Olivia might bring some unexpected surprisses. I would love to see Victoria completly dommed and her thoughts in the process.

Olivia should definitely end up on her knees. And since I hated the snobby bitches in school, I hope she ends up being the beta bitch. The lowest wrung on the sub ladder if you will. Plus I feel that theres potential for more stories if Victoria wins. Hope to see your decision soon!

Victoria to win that's for sure silk!

Olivia needs to taken down, and maybe even made to be submissive to the others as well

another great story, Victoria should win, after all its her story.

I think Victoria should win.

Put Octavia through as much humiliation as possible. Lord knows the bitch deserves it.

....Victoria! Bitches like Olivia should be knocked down a peg or two. Olivia seems to think that she is untouchable, but, she needs to learn that she's not.

I like Victoria, Olivia does not deserve to win

It's 'roger', not 'rodger'; 'bugger' is only ever used to mean 'sodomise' or, as you so delicately put it, 'arse fuck'; and the English say 'fuck' more often than 'shag.'

Your research is dire and, anyway, I don't think you can write.

As in days of old when Victoria was Queen of the British Relm, our modern Victory has conquered and should dominate as The Mistress over all! Hip, hip hooray! Hip, hip hooray! Hip, hip hooray!

Bring Olivia to her knees licking the queenly cunt!

Hip, hip hooray! Hip, hip hooray! Hip, hip hooray!

I'm a sucker for when the good guy wins

I think victoria should win. So as to teach olivia a lesson of how to feel being a submissive slut.

Victoria should because she seems to be the better dom glade you got back to some older stories hope you can finish this one out and add some more story lines to

A Perfect Fall that's the story I can't wait to finish but this ones great to all your stories are the best I have read about interracial lesbians kept up the good work but please get back to some of the other stories that we loyal fans are waiting for

Victoria shows a greater understanding of the submissive nature an would-be a better Dom for it.

To have Olivia win after all the build up would be anticlimatic. Victoria will prove in the end to be stronger and it would really be erotic to make Olivia service not only Victoria's mom, but Olivia's mom and all the others who Olivia dominated for so long. The story would be great having Victoria totally dominate and humiliate Olivia for several chapters. Like having Olivia suck Victoria's toes at school in front of the Cheerleaders. Having Olivia lick Olivia's mom's ass in front of Victoria's mom, etc. There are many great possibilities for extended chapters.

If you had Olivia win, then I believe the story would abruptly end there, no more to tell. So decide.

Your writing is great!!!

I would love to see victoria win... but why not right both one where vic wins another where olivian wins..... I mean really come on who doesnt think of this XD

Although it would seem right for Victoria to make Olivia her sex slave, Victoria is the one showing submissive tendencies so she will submit to Olivia. Unless, neither one submits and they are both Mistresses to their mothers, June, Becka, and Katrina who submits to Victoria.

It's about time you got back to this story, please just finish it before a year goes by. She should win as she is the bigger dom then Olivia and has Olivia's mom and her friend as her slaves and she can get their daughter’s to be her slaves too and that would give her five sluts to use.

Make her crush that little slut Olivia into submission -- a grand finale where they all pleasure Victoria's holes.

Would love to see Victoria's plans fall apart and Olivia as the victor.

Although the emotional answer naturally is Victoria, the sadist in me says I would like to see Victoria and her Mom serving together.

It should definitely be her

since it was Olivia who started the game with Victoria mom to seduce Victoria.

Victoria should finish it with the seduction of Olivia.