All Comments on 'Catching Mommy: Housewife Lesbians'

Well it doesn't matter who I think should win as this is an old story finished long ago. If Victoria wins it does much less collateral damage. Also she is a better Domme as she looks out for her subs while making them serve her. Olivia is dangerous and careless. She will ruin people's lives and while occasionally I like to she women completely ruin other women I don't feel empathic enough for Olivia to support her.

Victoria should win then safely absolutely torment her mother for years to come

you should not write a story unless you believe in your characters

but I couldn't clearly here the conversation. Here is a location HEAR is the word you are looking for as in Hear this

I know this story is long-finished, but I would have voted for Victoria. I hope she does win :)

Victoria should win

171 Well, I think some hot sex between Victoria and her mom would be nice and submittal of Olivia and Karen so good in many ways. Of course you have already written an ending, so I’ll just have to keep reading to get the answer.

Perverted outcome - Olivia wins , has both mom and daughter as slaves.

Preferred outcome - Olivia get taken down big time.

Haven't read any of the outcomes yet

VICTORIA RULES Olivia, the bitch!!!!

Olivia

Would’ve loved to see more Victoria/Bekkah scenes

Loved this. I see you did two endings, good idea.

Olivia is just a rich girl trying to dominate people. Victoria is willing to be kind and loving with friends but don't cross her. She will make you pay.

VICTORIA

shld be victoria ooo!!

Olivia

Victoria

Wow. Definitely Olivia

Just when Victoria thinks she's got her, Olivia cuts into her with words and she just breaks down

I think Victoria & her mother should win.

She has very little power of now but she will have the world when Olivia begs to be her pet

Victoria is obviously smarter and has more invested in being the dom in this situation. Olivia doesn't know that her mother is getting fucked. Plus Olivia is the one that was lusting after victorious first so she is the one with the crush on Victoria

Part 6 of this series called protecting mom-slut will be out in a day or two...

after Olivia dominates her mom...

Olivia wins, but not completely. Olivia is a natural domme. Victoria is not, entirely. Vic has a lot of her mother in her and has a deep need to submit, even though her brain rebels her body knows better. But, although Vic submits to Olivia, much to her surprise and pleasure, she does not become a sub. Lauren is a top to Kat's mom but a sub to Vic. Vic continues to top her Mom, and sub to Olivia. We all have to answer to someone, and the story needs to tells us to whom Olivia submits, and it is not Vic. Perhaps a mysterious older women whom Olivia expects to dominate but to her surprise and pleasure submits to.

The story ends with Vic findsing true love and happiness and understanding with Becca.

Is currently in the works...just finished page 20...it is coming along well and setting up for a grand finale between the antagonist Olivia and the protagonist Victoria...

Truth be told...I still don't know who is going to win...

It would be a shame to see all of Victoria's work be for nothing. Besides, Olivia totally has it coming to her.

Victoria has been creaming for it the whole time.

Victoria is getting turned on thinking about submitting to Olivia so I just can't wait for this story to show up cause I just want to see what happens so Olivia is the ultimate Mistress it's like a superheroine story even sexier please do your best in creating this story

Considering its make believe the good guy should win. In real life we hear about to many 'bad guys' getting away with things they shouldn't. With your writing ability, you'll be able to give us all a story that gets the blood pressure rising, (like everything you've done so far), and has a feel good ending, in more ways than one. Besides, who doesn't like seeing a bully taken down a peg or two? :D

Hope Olivia is the winner, Victoria seems to want that aswell

I really think Olivia should win. Sure we haven't been in her head to see how she feels, but Victoria can barely hold it together when Olivia confronts her. Victoria wants to submit to Olivia, and she desperately wants Olivia to force her to please the cheerleading squad; who wouldn't? It's much better to be in the head of a character who is confident that she will put her rival in her place, then realizing that her rival's place is over her.

She keeps daydreaming about submitting to Olivia, and is constantly surprised by Olivia's actions; how could she be a step ahead? She's trusting in people that Olivia dommed first (and better). That's not a winning strategy and she knows it, she just isn't ready to admit how much she loves Olivia's dominance.

It has to be Olivia.

i think that victoria should win, but that her mom is punished extra severely for her betrayal of her daughter.

I think Victoria should win. Mainly because I like to see a bully like Olivia be taken down. Plus I like Victoria a lot more than I do Olivia

It has to Victoria in the end... Maybe Olivia is on top for a while .... Victoria has shown feelings of submissiveness but hasn't yet done so... And I think she is nicer to her subs.... I.e her pal.... Whereas Olivia needs taken down ... Better story if she is broken .....

As others have said, Victoria has shown submissive tendencies when dealing directly with Olivia. There have also been signs that her domination is not as powerful as Olivia's seems to be. Victoria's Mom shows some signs of independence and not being totally under Victoria's control. Of course, since the series is from Victoria's point of view, we wouldn't see any doubts that Olivia might have. It is such a damn well written series, that I'd be happy with either outcome, but I am more a fan of the bad girl taking control so I vote for Olivia dominating and humiliating Victoria.

Olivia needs to win obviously. 1. She hasn't shown any sort of submissive streak while Victoria has. 2. Like her mother said it's just something about her that makes her slaves obey her vs Victoria who uses blackmail.

I personally would like the last chaoter to end something like this: Olivia has Victoria restrained on her bed, and before she takes her she shows her a pre-recorded video of her mother getting gangbanged by the entire cheerleading squad with huge squirting strap-on dildos. The video should end with all the girls "cumming" on her at the same time except for Olivia, who filled her dildo with her own cum instead of the various lotions the others used, and force Kate to swallow hers directly from the strap-on. Then she forces to Kate to look at the camera and tell Victoria she loves Olivia more than her. Now after watching this Victoria, already hot and bothered by all of this, in addition to being fingered the whole time by Olivia, can't wait to be fucked by Olivia.

Victoria should win and Gloria to be humiliated at school

Olivia clearly deserves to WIN. Victoria learned and copied everything she did to the mothers from Olivia.. If it was not for Olivia there would be no story. Victoria needs to be put back in her place and forced to do anything Olivia demands of her..The only right way for this story to end is with Olivia as the Victor.

Olivia for the WIN

Victoria should win, Olivia is a stuck up spoiled rich girl who needs to fall hard

This series has been fantasic i love the character building and the story. VICTORIA FOR THE WIN.

Victoria should definitely win!

Victoria

Victoria

Olivia should win

it's will be victoria.

When you publish next part of the story. Please be quick.

if Olivia wins Victoria becomes one of many an the story ends it becomes Olivia's story after that but if Victoria wins pushing the queen from her throne u can tell Olivia's story in all the ways she is humiliated an made to do things by her new mistress while Victoria enjoys her new power (mother daughter orgies an toy gang bangs maybe)

Victoria all the way

I agree. This has been a great series that Victoria should win but Olivia is the dom an has been. In the end Victoria should submit. And I know its a lot of work for you but this is the perfect series to have alternate endings. One with Victoria winning an one with Olivia.

Victoria is the clear winner

The voting must be running at least 3 to 1 in favor of Victoria. That is very predictable.....people find her more likeable and they want the ending of the story to be something resembling a "feel good"......they want Olivia to get what they think she has coming. Jasmine, we know that Victoria has some latent weaknesses and if you want the ending to the story to be as erotic as possible then you know what you have to write. I can already see that little triumphant smirk on Olivia's face.

Victoria For Sure!!!!!

Olivia must win she is the only true domme. Victoria is a switch.

Definatly Victoria!!! She reminds me a lot of myself as I am 2 the dominate personality... And her revenge plans are just briliant!!!

I think Victoria should win, she seems to be a harsh, but caring mistress, while Olivia on the on the other hand is a mean greedy, selfish bitch. I think Victoria winning will be a very climatic ending to the story :)

Victoria, of course! Her name has "victor" in it. Plus she is a generous and caring mistress, a wonderful dichotomy.

I think Victoria should win

Victoria should win

I think olivia should win

I think having Olivia win would be perfect.

Mistress Victoria!!

Olivia started it, so Victoria shld end it.

i really want to see her turn the tables on olivia

i'd like to point out we have no insight into olivia's internal struggles, she could very easily be just as weak kneed around victoria, but with a better poker face, so to speak. there have been no indicators at all as to whats going on in olivia's mind/pussy when the two girls face off, now that said...victora for the win(repeating my vote because i didnt see it when browsing comments), because due to the nature of this story, we have victoria who is a fairly fleshed out character, and olivia, who's personality is horny bitch, and thats all we really know about her. had olivia had more time in the story maybe olivia...but there's been no build to her. it'd be a huge let down for such a flat character to triumph

Make Olivia and Victoria realize they really are in love with each other, adding a little emotion into it would make it better I think, like back in one of the earlier parts, when Victoria told her mom she knew everything all along. My two cents.

The bad bitch always wins... Let the good bitch come out on top this time!

Great story! As hard as Victoria has tried Olivia ultimately should win.

I've been rooting for her the whole story and would love to see her domme that bitch Olivia.

The bitch deserves to be taken down, it's fun to see spoiled brats not get their way, Victoria 1000%

I think Olivia should definitely win. Victoria tried hard but she should give in to her submissive urges.

After all this to be humiliated and controlled despite all her planning and plotting to find she is the most submissive of them all . Olivia must win

Victoria should win. Long live Queen Victoria!

Olivia is a bitch - want her to be xtremely humiliated and be a slave

Victoria deserves the win. You should make her be sub to everyone in the story so far!!!

Victoria has to be the winner. She didn't start this but sure as hell is finishing it. She already has taken her mom and Becca from Olivia. Time to get Katrina and Olivia and make them suffer greatly.

Victoria must win.

Victoria x

Olivia should win

It would be great to see more of this story!!

Oliva should win, Victoria, Sara, all of them submit to the bitch, the final winner some other MILF who teaches all of them to server her.

Victoria should win!!! I want to see Olivia's shocked face!!!

I would love to see diffrent endings. But if not I'd love to see both of em ending up together and then dominating everyone.

Victoria without a doubt. I love this series and it's so hot. I love picturing Olivia's face when see realizes how she's been played and is forced to submit.

how about both of them end up hooking and being switches to each other and dominate to everyone?

Fantastic series, I look forward to more! I think Victoria should end up as the dom in the end, having olivia have to do the whole cheerleading squad would be a nice touch as well.

Victoria should win without a doubt. But like someone said, it would be interesting to have her submit to Olivia first, to make up her mind about which she wants.

The series is great so far, even if I do wish the chapters would be slightly longer ;)

Victoria should win in the end but having oliver dominate her first would be an interesting twist

It would be such a turn on for Olivia to get the upper hand, I love it when a domme gets turned into a sub. Maybe if it were possible you could release two versions? Because honestly I think it owuld be quite boring if Vic got the upper hand.

Victoria because I like it when the underdog gets the upper hand and I feel the plot would be a great ending to see Olivia dommed by Victoria.

...for the story ending...

Olivia should force Victoria and her mum into some intimacy...

that might also be the "tool" for deciding about the real mistress.

Victoria

First off great story. I love the character development and the plot is great. As for the ending I feel it should be Olivia. She is the one with experience, taking Victoria's mom and if you wrote it in all the women Victoria assumed she seduced. In the end Victoria can find out that Olivia was simply toying with her, having her pets simply play alone. Victoria will then fall into Olivia's trap and surrender herself to her better.

Goddamit I love when bitches fall and olivia is THE bitch of all bitches

Victoria needs to win. Olivia is such a bitch she needs to be put in her place.

Victoria has built up a house of cards and is putting her trust in those whom were already broken by Olivia. In fact, it would a nice twist if Lauren and June were already Olivia's dirty subs and like Victoria's mother, playing Victoria so Olivia would come out top. Could also see Victoria and her mother forced to move into Olivia's home to be Olivia's live in submissive pets.

You have set the down fall up perfectly for Victoria, she has already displayed numerous signs of weakness just like her mommy, not only in this story but in other ones as well. I just think it would be so hot for the main character to be a sub just like her mommy and have Olivia's mom get revenge on Victoria would be nice too.

HURRY

But not that easily. She should feel real conflict inside her. Maybe adding some twist like Olivia / Victoria falling in love, but definitively Victoria should be on top.

Victoria defiantly needs to win!!! It might be expected but that Olivia bitch needs to get what she deserves!!