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When I finally woke up properly I found Maria at my bedside. She smiled when she saw I was awake and leaned over to give me a gentle hug and kiss.
"You're a very brave girl Catherine and I'm so proud of you." She said.
I cried again, even though I didn't think there were any tears left in me. Maria rocked me silently, kissing the top of my head every now and again. When I eventually stopped she smoothed my hair back and gave me some water to drink.
"Catherine, there's someone waiting to see you." Maria said.
"I don't want to see anyone." I said emphatically.
"You should see this person my dear. Wait, I'll get him." She said, ignoring my protests.
She walked to the door and motioned for someone to come inside. My eyes widened as Thomas walked in. He sat down and took my hand in his. Maria tactfully left us alone. I stared at Thomas, unable to believe he was really here.
"I dreamt you were here. Am I still dreaming?" I asked stupidly.
He smiled sadly, "You weren't dreaming. I was here."
He paused and then continued softly.
"I saw her. I saw our daughter. She's so beautiful..." his voice cracked and he gripped my hand hard.
We were silent for a long time, neither of us able to talk just yet. I stroked his hands and tried not to fall apart. I didn't know how he found me and I didn't care. All that mattered was that he was here.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous7 months agoI know they say that if there’s no conflict then there’s no story but the conflict that Cathrine created was totally unnecessary for the dynamics that the characters were in. This is a very well written story that the main character made me hate. It’s like when you see a movie and the protagonist’s actions are so irksome and stupid that you root for the bad to kill them because they need to die for the movie a satisfying watch. There were so many directions that this story could have gone and yet the direction taken was a rushed letdown. I mean the story would have been more satisfying if the pregnancy ended in a miscarriage or if Cathrine died in childbirth.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoToo long to have a bad, future unknown, so much left up in air, ending. Grammatically well written. Alwaya enjoy the story more when the author is competent.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoYeah I really dont like this ending. If ur gonna go and fall in love with ur brother then you should be brave enough to deal with the consequences and not throw it all away cuz u cant deal.
