by Crazeems
I love how you have taken this story fromt he beginning. You advance the plot between Cathy and Chris yet you're taking time to build it up. Usually I'm in for more of the taboo type stories, but I'm eagerly awaiting your next installment. great job!
THIS IS SHAPING UP TO A REALLY NICE STORYLINE. SO FAR I HAVE TO SAY ITS A 5* SUCCESS. I'LL SAVE MY CRITICISM FOR THE END.