by IHaveControl
Loved the writing and the realism. Lucky guy. I look forward to reading more of your work
You have a very nice flow to your story. The build up was superb. The plot was realistic as well as the characters. I wanted to read more even after it ended. Keep on writing.
I am so FLATTERED!!! I know it's prejudiced but I
voted 5 for the submission.
What a great story and you are a superb writer. I
relived those moments reading about us and it brought
back a rush of erotic memories. I can't wait for you
to be here so I can read this personally to you.
I am going back to bed with my vibrator. Thank you for
writing that piece and it means a lot to be your
inspiration."
After reading that arousing story, I dreamt that night about my lover who was dressed in black leather tied spread eagle on the kitchen floor. To continue, I may write my own story.
This story deserves a 100 on the hot scale, not a 50 as it was incorrectly marked on my comment.
Great realistic story.
I enjoy a strap on experience once in a while.
Reminds me of my first time receiving my girlfriend's strapon and how I had to hint at it maddeningly until she finally went for it. Great story!
What was the name of the Dildo that she finally used on you? Was it the one that was featured in the Bend Over Boyfriend DVD?