by Taniera
Yes! Love that line. Wish I were there . . . oh, I feel as though I were! Great story!
Can't someone come up with some original sex? Feels like every other story on this site and with no emotional attachment.
Thank you for the feedback, I'll endeavor to increase the emotional connections in my subsequent works. :)
The scene and emotions you displayed within the story was exciting and well played. I would have liked a little more depth to the story but overall an excellent story.
tell the back story of who these people are. It should be very interesting.
ShrkDivr...
Thank you for the idea :) I will attempt to tell more of the story at some point.
A real loving wife story. Hope Colt has six loads in that chamber. He is going to need them.