by The Jewel
Much too elaborate for acting out. The waitng in the car until 0248?? Why? 2300 or 0000 would work as well.
We read his thoughts at the beginning, but they make no sense when the actual circumstances are laid out. In other words, the author more than misleads us, he flat-out lies.
The twilight zone of fantasy. I just don't find it erotic, and any two people that have to do that kind of shit to "perk up" their marriage have no business being married anyway. Hell, a good part of the concept of being married is so you don't have to go in search of strange...nor do you have to worry about who your significant other is screwing. This story is more like a nightmare than a "fantasy."
Story is shit and you two are definitely not jewels. Why not just divorce and find someone who trips your trigger without all the drama?