All Comments on 'Caught'

by The Jewel

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Nightowl22Nightowl22over 19 years ago
A play acting?

Much too elaborate for acting out. The waitng in the car until 0248?? Why? 2300 or 0000 would work as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Starts with a lie by the author

We read his thoughts at the beginning, but they make no sense when the actual circumstances are laid out. In other words, the author more than misleads us, he flat-out lies.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Echhh

The twilight zone of fantasy. I just don't find it erotic, and any two people that have to do that kind of shit to "perk up" their marriage have no business being married anyway. Hell, a good part of the concept of being married is so you don't have to go in search of strange...nor do you have to worry about who your significant other is screwing. This story is more like a nightmare than a "fantasy."

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
JEWEL? LMAO

Story is shit and you two are definitely not jewels. Why not just divorce and find someone who trips your trigger without all the drama?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

stupid shit story

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

load of crap gave it one far too much

jimjam69jimjam69over 2 years ago

Sorry, saw it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Garbage

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