All Comments on 'Caught in a Trap Ch. 01'

Liked the story. I hope you keep at it. Although, personally, I think more should be put into character development. I barely know anything about any of them except what shows from the off-putting lack of empathy that could have some interesting events and ideas behind it. Other than that the writing is decent, I didn't notice any grammatical/spelling errors, and the eroticism is well done. ;)

Clever story and well written, I'll be back for the next episode. Thanks.

Not bad, but seems incomplete. She's caught and toyed with. Big deal. Where's the escape and recapture? She's smart, why not give her a chance to get even, or turn the tables on them? She has no friends among the villagers? How about the guy she helped earlier? Can't he be a hero? And wouldn't she reward a hero?

I'm a bit confused as to why she didn't hit one of them while she was free.

Shame this won't be continued—I was looking forward to the character's escape.

Loved the story. Did you stop writing??