All Comments on 'Caught in the Crosshairs Ch. 02'

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LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
First Segment SloooW. This one is pepping up !

You have a real knack for describing male/ female approaches, the byplay and inner dialogue that goes on during the (accelerated) courtship/seduction period. One thing I'm pretry sure of is that you know more about chatting up a pretty girl then the process of international sactions and contract killings. Thanks for this chapter.

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