All Comments on 'Caught In the Limelight'

One of the better "Wham, bam, thank you, Ma'am!" I have read. Enjoyed it!

To be completely honest this story needs a lot of work. The sentence flow was really choppy and difficult to get through and the dialog was stiff and unrealistic. You also tried to force way too much detail, sometimes leaving a little to the reader's imagination is good. Also, try not to constantly say the same things over and over again, your reader won't forget about Penny's wonderful cleavage in the sentence right after the one about her cleavage.

I know this a pure stroke fantasy but ,but the author goes on and on about the same things and if the main character is married they make serious decisions Together, a fact the lesbian boutique assistant and authour should know . So come on Maggie a little realistic

the line regarding the rising inflection so typical of the Irish ,Scotish and English ." What about the "Welsh" you fucking ignoramus ,the Welsh are the most famous sing,song language of all ,Im also struggling with your repeated descriptions about just every thing. You leave nothing to the imagination,and that is what reading is all about