All Comments on 'Caught Jerking off Ch. 01'

Lack lustre

That's not fair! You've left me with a big hard on hoping to enjoy some serious mom and son enjoyment. Please finish the story, please let them succumb to their sexual starvation and fuck the shit out of each other.

Often Mom's try to ignore son's bad behavior instead of confronting it. Many young guys can benefit from proper discipline and learning control.

I'm guessing you deleted them? Am I right? If a person who's literate reads a story written by someone who isn't, it's distracting. If the author doesn't proofread their story to see things like, in one paragraph, he's 17 and in the next, he's suddenly 19, and so on, it's really, really distracting.

But you probably knew that already, having deleted the comments that pointed it out. Am I right? I am, aren't I?

For the story.

Dull, boring, short, no story. I know, chapter 1. Chapters work when each chapter has something worth reading. This did not. Pull it down, finish the story and then put it up.

This is little more than an opening paragraph; need a little more.

RS

Cruel heartless birch of a mom. Poor guy. Sad that a lot of women are actually like this. It's almost like they take out every frustration they EVER have experienced on the one person most vulnerable to their sick need to hurt someone they can personify as their stand in for every hated male they ever knew. In real life this is exactly what leads a lot of men to hate women. Ironic that the mother actually tells him she does not want him to objectify women, when she just gave him the perfect reason to do just that. In this day and age there is just no excuse for any woman, MUCH less a mother, not to know males masturbate, and that it's normal to do so. Anyway, your writing is good, but the story itself just left me angry, and feeling sorry for the poor guy she hurt. I honestly wish I haven't read it.

It made me chuckle a coupla times. Hopefully, there'll be some action soon.

yea. I probably didn't check this over enough after i wrote it. I didnt really think much about it, didn't delete any comments thou--infact it's the 1st time I read any. Ig there could be more substance too. lol next chapter will be longer if I get around to it.

Don't let me hanging (or standing) like this. This story has to have more

I don't recall my mom being upset when she saw me wanking off ....

Except for the ending I believe most boys have been through this. I know I have. Mixed emotions of Mom's reaction to me laying there in bed with a huge hardon jerking it. By then I was an exhibitionist and her reaction just fed me more. BTW I caught my daughter jilling at a similar age and I probably had a similar reaction! Thanks for sharing.

well that sucks, here I sit cock in hand ready to cum and you end the story 4yourpleasureiam

keep going this is good.. it happened to me too.. (Real Life.. but my sister.. )

Young me jack off and she should have been more understanding.

I hope she is better

It takes a man to understand him. I'd love to have helped him. Anyone need help?

Very nice story. It is easy to read.

How u gon let her take your phone when u a grown ass man