All Comments on 'Caught Naked at the Pool'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sexy neighbor Jim

How about some hair for Jim's sexy body? That way the neighbors will have more to ogle -- sexy cock AND sexy hairy chest!

maddictmaddictover 7 years ago
'Its a beautiful day in the neighborhood.'

'Wood you be mine, could you be mine, won't you be my neighbor. ' Mr. Rodgers. So its not entirely true, the part about big hands big cock, you have the big cock part, its just as well because your neighbor was ok with the view.

The 3 rules of real estate, location, location, location and you've picked a fine location.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Awesome!

Loved this scene!

PoorwriterPoorwriterover 7 years ago
VERY FUN!

I thoroughly enjoyed your story and I agree that that annony-puss is an idiot and let's see what they write - right? Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Nude Day?

Great story...you should have saved this for the Nude Day contest as it is more on point than some of the actual submissions I've read...

Anyway, where's the sequel?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
LIKE IT VERY MUCH, GAVE IT A 5- [(☆☆☆☆☆-) 4.6/5.0 = 92%]

Very intelligently conceived.

Skillfully crafted.

You can't go wrong if you read this story.

NudistDavidNudistDavidabout 4 years ago

Excellent story! I read it nude in my backyard ... And hoped the neighbors were watching from their windows .... I can't wait to get the pool going this summer, and read your next installment! Thanks again, David.

Tripper_DudeTripper_Dude11 months ago

Great job on creating the scene and making it all flow smoothly together. Very enjoyable read and definitely left the reader excited for the continuation of the story. Hopefully you’ll return to complete the series in the future but as it’s been many years since you started it I’m guessing that you will not be returning. Thank you.

olblueyesolblueyesabout 2 months ago

well, dang it,,kind of a non ending,,and it was just getting good,

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