All Comments on 'Caught Secretary Nears Promotion'

by JRob

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Paxo1944Paxo1944about 10 years ago
Good Story

This was a good story, but I think you need to sack the editor "Rather, she whole seen had me crazy" surely this should be "Rather, the whole scene had me crazy".

I do hope you continue with with a few more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Pretty good

Hope you will post another chapter about this

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I must admit... i got excited when I seen your name in the new stories!! Glad to see you writing again!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Excellent, Outstanding

Really liked this one. Realistic. Having been caught by my boss in a compromising position, I can identify somewhat, but nothing happened like this. He just fired me. But maybe if I'd blown him, well, it would have been different. Who cares, I didn't like the job and got a better one. But I am more careful where we, uh, cavort. This story was so hot that I had to do my b/f after reading....in my new office.

BTW, why is it that so many commenters talk abour grammer or sentence structure or other things like that. I like the stories, especially the mature and nonconsentual ones, gets me so hot. I'm not reading for correct use of the English language that's for sure.

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I began writing for the thrill of seeing my name in print, but lately it is a lot more. It has led to great friendships. I do a lot of travel, and could classify myself as a people watcher. I love to observe, then use the imagination to write about those observations. Along th...