by smudgebucket
The scene in the movie theatre could have used more work but other than that a good story. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Your story has been reviewed. You can see the review on the New story reviews thread on the Authors' Hangout here: http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=428901&page=11&pp=25
Any comments or questions pertaining to that review can be directed to that thread: http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=18265130#post18265130
Nice story - needs further chapters for definate - possibly with the pupil being shown the ropes !
I am really not into the LGBTLMNOP thing, but I enjoyed reading your story. It was nicely written with good mechanics that make it easy to read. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing!