by Skidder
Great Start! I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update soon.
Gonna have to read this again when I am uuhhmm alone! Looking forward to the rest.... fantastic story... loved it!
Very well written, the characters were drawn well. The author also drops little pieces of history into the story adding to its depth.
The erotic bits were very erotic, rich and full of passion.
If this is continued I look forward to reading the rest of it.
Nicely written story.. I like your writing style and the story flows nicely. Well written and edited. Please continue with these characters. I think that this story would make a very good basis for a series of stories based on their evolving relationship and her development, training and changes in her life.
Very awesome story! It was a pleasure to read...and really do hope you continue with the story :-D
Loved it, very well written, I love when I can't see whats next but just ride the waves of emotion rocking forth VERY NICE read!
Thank you all for your comments on Cazi's Journey. This story is my first foray into this particular era in history. I am glad to see it so well received. I am working on continuing the story. I feel that it has a lot of potential but r/t is being a bear so please be patient with me.