All Comments on 'Cecillia'

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Boxlicker101Boxlicker101over 16 years ago
Interesting

story, When you gotta go, it's best to go out with an heroic flourish.

Black TulipBlack Tulipover 16 years ago
Nice

Nice story. It could have used a bit more suspense since it's in the Halloween contest. But as a romance it's fine.

Good luck.

Black Tulip

glynndahglynndahover 16 years ago
A nice little ghost story

I would have liked a little more, though.

MagicaPracticaMagicaPracticaover 16 years ago
A lovely ghost story

Weaving the tradional with the erotic. Lovely.

damppantiesdamppantiesover 16 years ago
Sweet

I was wondering what's happening, but you wrapped it up in the end nicely. Good luck in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Creepy. Much different from your normal style. Quick break from work

PickeringPickeringalmost 7 years ago
Wonderful story!!

Not creepy at all but thoughtful and romantic. Great read! Thank you very much..

SpunkyAndSparkySpunkyAndSparkyover 1 year ago

its lenght makes the moment framed in the story that much better...

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