All Comments on 'Cemetery Summons Ch. 18'

Great story so far can't wait for the next chapter. There were some gram issues and spelling that I didn't notice in the previous chapters but it wasn't too bad all in all a very good read.

ive bin reading this story since you posted the first one and have never bin dry since amazing story i really want to know what comes next

I first started this story several hours ago before a normal persons bedtime... -__- Its now morning its been over 15 hours since I last slept and I can't stop reading (this and another story). My main issue is who exactly is this Dalaria (if I spelled it write) and her part is too sudden as well as the hell escapade. Need more transition there.

"Herkommen" is far to commanding to be considered anything resembling pleading - it's what a commanding officer, superior, or other kind of person of authority would use. Also, it's only used for actual movement.

The pleading version would be "Komm schon!", which is less commanding, less formal, far more common in everyday use and can be used both for "come here" and "calm down".

After 20 foldings, (2 to the 20th power, or about a million individual layers), there is too much diffusion in the carbon content, the steel becomes almost homogenous in this respect, and the act of folding no longer gives any benefit to the steel

anon,

they are in hell. i think carbon and steel would have different properties there. lets assume that and enjoy a truly lovely and fucked up story shall we? btw im an engineer. just sayin.

I'd think there would be other things to criticize like jack trying to fuck his best friend as soon as she says she loves him without thinking that he's leaving her or trying to tell her any of the truth of what's going on with him. Does what you say really matter? From the start i thought it was weird the story was made with succubi but the main character is hardly fucking them when succubus was a creation of sex meant to drive a man wild with sex and forget about everything else until he died. I never said anything about how they are not really succubus but you people got a problem with folding metal...

because this is beginning to make sense to me. I have obviously slipped a cog someplace! As to comments about metalurgy and "machining," I can only agree with "...just read the story." The author's statements are automatically correct; Hell it is HIS creation! He is the God of this story; go find another diety to argue with! Lynn

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XLWzH_1eZsc

Gotta say, love the German