All Comments on 'Centauri'

by Amoronaut

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JaekartJaekartover 11 years ago
Interesting Plot

So far a well developed plot and story. A minor point, is Darius having the implant, being supposedly in control of himself, and making the decision to release the information he has. I did not find any hints as to why he became willing to do so.

I definitely will be looking for another installment into this story. Bravo !!

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 11 years ago
Needing more

There are a lot of interesting directions where this story can go and I would like to read more. With the mysterious alien culture and the agency he worked for provide a lot of areas to develop the story. Good luck and please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
huh

I hate pice by pice storys.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Piece by piece

stories are better.

killerwhale681killerwhale681over 11 years ago
Scifi Noir

Great start! Kinda has a Blade runner feel to it....really don't want to be little people, do we? Can't wait, so have at it!

flowergurl17flowergurl17over 11 years ago
good

i liked it so far. good luck and don't forget to have fun with it . cant wait for more

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