All Comments on 'Centerfold Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Very Good Story

I'm a sucker for a well-written love story and that is just what this story is.

I loved it.

Alvaron53Alvaron53over 16 years ago
Good start

Enjoyed the opening chapter, looking forward to the next. Thank you.

talldarkfellowtalldarkfellowabout 9 years ago
Good Effort.

Sweet and fun. Just found the plot a little rushed.

retmstrretmstralmost 9 years ago
****

Cute. Writing was good. The title throws the reader off a bit. Cheers!

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