All Comments on 'Chair in the Corner'

by brainfade

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 9 years ago
That was a most agreeable story, brainfade

I always enjoy this kind of story, and you have written this particular one very well indeed. Thank you, please write more in this style and have five big shiny ones from me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Liked your story very much

Fits the season - 2nd half of October - well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Unusual Story

I enjoyed your imaginative story, and the ending was as expected but nevertheless the story was good. I don't think that a sequel would enhance the tale, but I could be wrong.

ag2507ag2507over 9 years ago
Author engaged brain

Well done! And BEGS for a sequel...

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
MY SENTIMENTS

exactly Mel_Pomene. What a great story !!

Thanks for sharing,

Bob.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh Yes.

Unusual and enjoyable. Definitely 5* stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very creative!

Story shows a vivid imagination. I enjoyed the story. Do some more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Great Start

This was an interesting and delightful story.It deserves the 5 stars I awarded to itGood luck and good read on the next submission.

YgraineYgraineover 9 years ago
Really enjoyed it.

So nice to read something from our side of the pond. I love your descriptions and your characterisations and dialogue are very good. A real Tom's Midnight Garden for adults.

MitchFraellMitchFraellover 9 years ago
Very good

A good short story with all sorts of possibilities.

chilleywilleychilleywilleyover 9 years ago
Excellent

Not so much I to ghost sex , but it was very well written. I confess I am an Anglophile.

Chilley

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Different!

sexy, fun and unexpected!

TigerladyandhimTigerladyandhimover 9 years ago
Delightful

Really enjoyed the story and it was well paced and told.

Look forward to more

fanfarefanfareover 9 years ago
ditto

brainfade, I have to echo all the complimentary comments you have received for this story. Skillfully written, very imaginative and erotically mysterious!

gnome_mangnome_manover 9 years ago
Love it.

What more can I say? A beautiful story, with a really good ending.

dinkymacdinkymacover 9 years ago
Very nice!

Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Just one quibble.

Pay a bit more attention to the words you use 'cos sometimes you use sound-alikes that miss the word you intend.

For instance "They were very chapel and tea-total, ..." - the word is 'teetotal'.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Just enjoyable

Good sex, good ending. Wanted to know if the wife tasted the apples too!

Thanks

mojorisin1967mojorisin1967over 9 years ago
To praise more isn't easy.

Looking forward to more stories from your hand. Besides the hot and romantic story (the garden reminded us to the 'Mists of Avalon' immediately) we enjoyed the vocabulary. For a long time reading stories on LIT we didn't have to look up so many words.

May your ink-pot be neatly filled.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
a little vague

could do with a sequel

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Keep it going.

Keep it going,

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

A magic story.

jlg07jlg0722 days ago

Outstanding!

Anonymous
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