by brainfade
Looking forward to more stories from your hand. Besides the hot and romantic story (the garden reminded us to the 'Mists of Avalon' immediately) we enjoyed the vocabulary. For a long time reading stories on LIT we didn't have to look up so many words.
May your ink-pot be neatly filled.
Good sex, good ending. Wanted to know if the wife tasted the apples too!
Thanks
Pay a bit more attention to the words you use 'cos sometimes you use sound-alikes that miss the word you intend.
For instance "They were very chapel and tea-total, ..." - the word is 'teetotal'.
brainfade, I have to echo all the complimentary comments you have received for this story. Skillfully written, very imaginative and erotically mysterious!
Really enjoyed the story and it was well paced and told.
Look forward to more
Not so much I to ghost sex , but it was very well written. I confess I am an Anglophile.
Chilley
So nice to read something from our side of the pond. I love your descriptions and your characterisations and dialogue are very good. A real Tom's Midnight Garden for adults.
This was an interesting and delightful story.It deserves the 5 stars I awarded to itGood luck and good read on the next submission.
Story shows a vivid imagination. I enjoyed the story. Do some more!!
exactly Mel_Pomene. What a great story !!
Thanks for sharing,
Bob.
I enjoyed your imaginative story, and the ending was as expected but nevertheless the story was good. I don't think that a sequel would enhance the tale, but I could be wrong.
I always enjoy this kind of story, and you have written this particular one very well indeed. Thank you, please write more in this style and have five big shiny ones from me!