All Comments on 'Challenge Ch. 02'

by skausy121

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shyintxshyintxover 12 years ago
Lost it

I really liked where your story was going at first, but now with the rape of a virgin and her becoming his sex slave you lost it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Ditto shyintx's comment - your 'hero' is an abusive asshole

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