All Comments on 'Chance: A Day in May Ch. 04'

It has come to the end of their sensual actions. Now they retreat to just friends. Is that going to be possible? I can tell one, personally, it will drive him nuts and willpull at herlike a strong magnet. She hasn't been loved that well and she does want love regardless of her convictions. If they don't get together again it will surprise me. He may discover her husband is a terrorist and she'll need a lot more comforting when they drag his ass away. Then, too, it may well become THAT day in May in their memories. Their Roman Holiday!

Hey Troup.I'm a big fan.A big fan!This one could really be your best so far.I hope you figure out a way that these two can get together where they both feel comfortable.If you get stumped,let me know.I have a coupla ideas.You are alot more adept at this than me ,so for now I'll let you have at it.

Troubador:

I have to echo Nightowl22's thoughts that a platonic relationship is not possible for any protracted period. It's a great series and I'm intrigued to see where your heading. Thank You. Ronnie W.

Troubador you have set this one up nicely:) First you made us old geasers happy(: Now you setup a 'platonic' couple of days. Can't wait to read what happens. still the question how to 'educate' the rushing husband.

wonderful writing and much suspence