by AutumnWriter
Interesting and exciting. Great use of conflict between the various characters really moves this story along. A Must Read!
to Tim Mcgraw: I like it, I love it, I want some more of it!
This is a great story and I hope there are several more chapters. Thanks for the work you do.
I thought that Glenda was a fighter but I was, apparently, wrong. Was Paul worth fighting for? His casual episode with Marge makes me doubt it. The plot thickens! Paul has his work cut out handling all the governmental crap. In my 45 years in the business I have met many like Wilton who are continuously on the look out for a knife between their shoulder blades. A truly great tale so far! Pete.
Really Marge complicated things around our hero!
THere is going to be a lot of work to reach an acceptable
resolution. Miss Wright seems a little too naive for me.
I'm thinking Paul is trying to figure out how to slay these dragons. But all eggs must be destroyed.
who wins a fight.....no one....TK U MLJ LV NV