All Comments on 'Chance Encounter Ch. 03'

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duddle146duddle146almost 18 years ago
Exciting!

Interesting and exciting. Great use of conflict between the various characters really moves this story along. A Must Read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Please

hurry the next chapter along,this is a great story.

DesertPirateDesertPiratealmost 18 years ago
With apologies

to Tim Mcgraw: I like it, I love it, I want some more of it!

This is a great story and I hope there are several more chapters. Thanks for the work you do.

PEATBOGPEATBOGalmost 18 years ago
Keeping us on tenterhooks!!!!

I thought that Glenda was a fighter but I was, apparently, wrong. Was Paul worth fighting for? His casual episode with Marge makes me doubt it. The plot thickens! Paul has his work cut out handling all the governmental crap. In my 45 years in the business I have met many like Wilton who are continuously on the look out for a knife between their shoulder blades. A truly great tale so far! Pete.

bruce22bruce22about 16 years ago
Building up Nicely

Really Marge complicated things around our hero!

THere is going to be a lot of work to reach an acceptable

resolution. Miss Wright seems a little too naive for me.

cliffhanger20cliffhanger20over 11 years ago
IN DAYS OF OLD WHEN KNIGHTS WERE BOLD

I'm thinking Paul is trying to figure out how to slay these dragons. But all eggs must be destroyed.

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
SACRIFICES GALORE AND PAIN TO BOOT

who wins a fight.....no one....TK U MLJ LV NV

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